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托福寫作滿分的套路——內(nèi)容信息密度
時(shí)間：2020-08-11
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大的來說，正如ETS的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)所說，考試是整體打分的。小的來說，確實(shí)評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)有很多維度構(gòu)成的。但籠統(tǒng)來說，滿分的文章一定是信息密度足夠高的。當(dāng)然關(guān)于“信息密度”最好的解釋，就是看一下幾篇滿分的文章。
20150912 Do you agree or disagree with the statement: In order to succeed, it is better to be like others rather than different from everybody else.
滿分考生文章節(jié)選
Admittedly, to be like others is easier and safer, because there are already people who have succeeded in this way and what we should do is to follow their steps. For example, if see a type of mobile phone is very popular, can produce the same kind of phones as well. Because we are sure that mobile phones like this are embraced by people, we can make a great amount of money in the same way. If we do some change to it, maybe the new phones are not welcomed by the public and what is waiting for us is failure. Hence, I concede that to be like others is safer and it promises us a bright future.
同樣是一個(gè)段落，展開上比前一位少了很多，但是信息的密度是夠的。為了提高同學(xué)們寫作表達(dá)能力，我們朗思教育老師給大家建了一個(gè)【托福寫作公益學(xué)習(xí)交流群】，大家可以在線給我們留言【姓名+電話或微信】，老師拉大家進(jìn)對應(yīng)學(xué)習(xí)群~
