2024年7月下旬托福學術討論寫作分析及范文
時間:2024-07-30
來源:托福學習網
作者:未知
目前2024年7月份托福線下考試已經結束了,總體上來說,7月份共有10道寫作類的話題,主要包含了工作、生活、政府及教育類相關話題,試題的難度有高,也有低,話題類型分布比較廣泛,下面我們一起來看看吧。
首先,在考試話題方面,和生活類文化娛樂有關的話題占據了最大的比例,共有3道題,分別關于選擇居住地、生活質量以及居住民宿;其中政府政策類話題有2道題,分別關于培養年輕人的藝術情操以及政府救濟。工作類話題有2道題,與提升自己的展示水平以及工作晉升相關;教育類話題有2道題,分別為學生參加社團和班上學生年齡;科技類話題只有1道題,詢問年輕人為何不愿意使用新科技。
綜上所述,7月份的話題可以說是非常豐富,新出的寫作題目占比不少。其中文化娛樂、政府政策等是相對更加重要的主題,考生需要對此有所了解,并能夠運用相關的詞匯和表達來討論相關的話題。千萬不能夠只練習自己熟悉的話題哦!
其次,在考試題型方面,開放類題目占10%,而封閉類題目則占90%,這意味著考生需要具備較強的思維能力和語言表達能力,能夠在短時間內快速理解題目要求并給出合理的答案。在面對二選一或三選一的題目時,同學們可以考慮支持己方觀點,反駁對方觀點,豐富自己的論證角度。即便是開放式的話題,同學也可以把它轉化為二選一來寫,即在想不到新觀點時,可以選擇同意其中一位同學的想法,再給出自己的新原因。
總的來說,托福寫作7月份的考試話題和題型分布比較均衡,不僅有生活類話題,其他各種話題均有出現,考生需要多了解各種話題的知識和表達;就考試題型來說,封閉類話題仍是重點,考生在備考時需要有側重點,以應對可能出現的各種情況。
7月20日上午場線下托福考試,出了一道教育類話題。和學生社團有關,難度不大。
參考范文
I believe that encouraging students to join at least one club or organization is a great idea. Being involved in a group like this can truly help students develop important social skills and learn how to work well with others, which prove essential for success in any career. Take my friend John, for example. When he started college, he was incredibly shy and had a hard time making friends. His advisor suggested he join a student club to meet people who shared his interests. Since he had been playing guitar since he was a kid, he decided to join the guitar club. Through learning and practicing together, he quickly made friends with other like-minded club members. Within a few months, he became much more outgoing and comfortable talking to others. This confidence was key to his success after graduation, helping him land a great job where he quickly excelled and was promoted. He believes the guitar club gave him the skills and confidence to get where he is today. (169 words)
7月20日下午場線下托福考試,這次出了一道政府政策類話題。和政府救濟有關,難度較大。該題目也是由過往的獨立寫作題目改編而來。
參考范文
I believe the government should prioritize financially supporting the older generation.
One important reason is that, for many elderly individuals, their primary source of income is pensions, which often only cover basic living costs. As people age, they may face challenges such as declining health, reduced earnings, and social isolation. In other words, many senior citizens live on a limited budget, and their health insurance may not fully cover medical expenses. If they get sick, their lives can become very difficult, especially if they can't afford to see a doctor. Therefore, it's crucial that the government provides additional financial aid to cover necessities like food, housing, and transportation, therefore improving their overall well-being and quality of life. Government programs like pensions, healthcare subsidies, and social welfare can significantly ease these burdens. This support can help improve their health and happiness, and also help them feel more secure and trust the government. (151 words)
7月21日上午場線下托福考試,這次出了一道工作類話題。和工作晉升有關,難度中等。該題目也是由過往的獨立寫作題目改編而來。
參考范文
I agree that an employee's ability is the most important factor when considering promotions.
It is true that factors like seniority and experience have their place, but they don't necessarily guarantee that an employee is able to excel in a higher-level position. A skilled employee possesses a wide range of capabilities, including problem-solving, critical thinking, adaptability, and the capacity to learn and grow. These are the attributes that truly drive success in any role, especially in leadership roles. Employees with exceptional ability can often quickly grasp new concepts, tackle complex challenges, and motivate their team to achieve outstanding results. On the other hand, though seniority and experience offer valuable insights and knowledge, they shouldn't be the sole deciding factors for promotion. Sometimes, senior employees may become set in their ways of thinking. This could weaken their ability to adapt to evolving workplace dynamics, especially in the rapidly changing landscape of new tech products like AI. (155 words)
7月24日上午場線下托福考試,這次出了一道生活類話題。和居住民宿有關,難度中等。
參考范文
I believe the trend of staying in private residences while traveling is a positive one.
While hotels offer certain conveniences, private residences provide a unique and often more authentic experience. By that I mean, travelers can immerse themselves in the local culture, enjoy more space and privacy, and get to feel like a local compared to traditional hotels. My recent trip to Singapore perfectly illustrates this. Instead of a generic hotel room, I opted for a charming and cozy apartment in a local neighborhood near the city center via Airbnb. My host, a retired doctor, warmly welcomed me. He not only offered insider tips on the best local eateries and hidden gems off the tourist trail but also accompanied me to traditional scenic spots and places of interest. He acted as my personal guide and translator, and I am truly grateful for that! Such an authentic experience is not easily available in most modern hotels which often offer standardized rooms and services. This personalized interaction fosters a sense of community and cultural exchange, enriching the overall travel experience. (178 words)
7月24日下午場線下托福考試,這次出了一道教育類話題。和班上學生年齡有關,難度不大。
參考范文
I believe it's best to avoid multi-age classrooms in primary schools.
First, young children are at different developmental stages, both physically and cognitively. Even a small age gap can mean big differences in how kids learn and act. For example, a child who is two years older may be more advanced in his reading and math skills, while a younger child may still be struggling with basic concepts. This can create a significant gap in learning abilities within the classroom, making it difficult for teachers to effectively respond to all the needs of learners.
Furthermore, this age difference also impacts social and emotional development. Older children tend to be more mature and independent, while younger children are often still learning basic social skills. This can lead to conflicts and misunderstandings within the classroom. I personally experienced this when I repeated a grade; I felt isolated as the oldest student in a class of much younger children. (156 words)
