2023年9月16日托福寫作機經,真題解析
時間：2023-09-22
來源：網絡
作者：未知
前面給大家匯總過2023年9月16日場托福考試當中閱讀、聽力等方面的機經回顧，本期我們重點給大家從網上分享一下托福寫作部分的機經回顧，包含了綜合寫作和獨立寫作兩個部分，也有解析，大家可以看看。
Writing 寫作
綜合寫作
閱讀：
最近發現某個海洋里的微生物具有眼睛（sea-dwelling microorganism’s eye），猜測眼睛的用途的幾個theory。
1）眼睛可能用于檢測并追蹤獵物，幫助微生物捕食。
2）幫助微生物找到陽光強度更高的地方，以吸收更多的太陽能。
3）用于瞄準獵物，然后用某種方式捕獲它們，可能是使用觸角等。
聽力：
反駁
1. 與沒有眼睛的相關微生物相比，它們仍然可以成功追蹤獵物。這可能意味著眼睛具有其他功能，而不是僅用于追蹤獵物。
2. 微生物的進化研究發現，它們變得越來越不依賴陽光產生能量。因此，海洋微生物的復雜眼睛可能有其他功能，而不僅僅是吸收太陽能。此外，聽力認為這種進化與眼睛用于感知陽光的功能不合理。
3. 研究人員經過仔細檢查后發現，這些眼睛無法很好地聚焦，因此無法提高對其他微小生物的刺穿準確性。這表明眼睛可能無法用于瞄準食物或確定獵物的位置。
獨立寫作
Your professor is teaching a class on sociology. Write a post responding to the professor's question.
In your response, you should do the following.
- Express and support your opinion.
- Make a contribution to the discussion in your own words.
An effective response will contain at least 100 words.
Doctor Achebe:
More and more, online shopping is becoming the primary way that many people obtain everyday goods. But what are the ramifications for the society in which we live? On the one hand, online shopping has advantages -for example, I can make a purchase without ever leaving my home. However, with fewer people shopping at local shops, in some places, these establishments are having a hard time competing. Do you think that online shopping is, on the whole, affecting society?
Paul:
I think that online shopping has had negative impacts on society. In my city, many local stores have shelves filled with various products that you can find in online stores. This has forced some of them to close down, which not only affects the amount of tax revenue generated in our local community but also impacts the number of job opportunities available to the community members.
Kelly:
It's unfortunate that some local stores are forced to close down, but that's the nature of competition. As consumers, we benefit greatly from online shopping due to lower prices. Even if I find a physical store that can compete with online sellers in terms of pricing, I am still likely to make the purchase online because it means I don't have to spend money on transportation to the store.
網上購物對社會的影響
Paul認為是不好的
Kelly認為是好的
立場：網上購物有積極影響
理由：促進小微企業發展，對就業和經濟有好處
