2023年1月4日的時(shí)候進(jìn)行了本年度第一場(chǎng)托福考試，其中寫作部分出現(xiàn)了一道關(guān)于教育類的話題，因此這類話題屬于老調(diào)重彈的內(nèi)容了，大家基本上都能做好游刃有余，寫作難度還是比較低的，下面我們一起來看看這道題目的寫作范文吧。

是不是在過去，老師對(duì)年輕人的影響比現(xiàn)在更大？

這道題目屬于現(xiàn)象證明類題型，題目含有今昔對(duì)比和二選一。思路提示：

1. 過去和現(xiàn)在相比，有哪些顯著的發(fā)展和變化？

2. 過去和現(xiàn)在相比，成為一名老師是更容易還是更難了？

3. 過去和現(xiàn)在相比，老師有哪些新的功能，如何影響學(xué)生？

高分寫作范文：

I totally disagree that teachers in the past had a greater influence on young people for several reasons.

Firstly, one important factor relates to the academic aspect. By that I mean, nowadays most teachers need to undergo more systematic and rigorous training and have decent educational backgrounds to become who they are now. This means their teaching competence outcompetes that of teachers in the past. Such improved teaching ability would positively influence students, especially in terms of their academic performance.

In fact, when teachers are equipped with new teaching knowledge and the most state-of-the-art technological products, they can deliver their lessons in a much more vivid way. These engaging courses can greatly attract students' attention, promoting their absorption of knowledge, thus increasing learning efficiency. Consequently, students' learning progress can be reflected in a wide range of tests and assessments—one of the key indicators of school performance. This, in contrast, was not easily achievable when teachers in the past lacked access to technology and high-quality educational resources.

Some may argue that technological advances can diminish the influence of teachers because students can have other sources of information instead of relying on their teachers. There is a truth of element in this statement but it is equally true that teachers still serve other essential, irreplaceable functions. For instance, apart from technological literacy, teachers are also trained to be more aware of students' psychological health and become more emotionally responsive. By that I mean, when learning difficulties arise, teachers are always present at school, helping learners cope with obstacles and rise to different challenges.

In other words, teachers are just like a third parent, giving additional support (emotional and academic) to children, especially when parents are not there. Moreover, teachers' influence involves guiding children and helping them learn how to behave properly and respect their peers. Without teachers' help, children may fail to form good relationships with people from different backgrounds. Clearly, compared with the past, teachers are better role models who reinforce good behavior and important values.   (336 words)