很多同學都反映說雅思考試當中最難的莫過于雅思大作文了，的確想要考好雅思作文或者說考個7分，簡直不要太難了！今天給大家分享一個6月5日雅思寫作高分范文教育類話題，希望對備考雅思的同學們有所幫助！

大作文題目：
Although family has a great influence on children’s life, it is the influence of outside the home that plays a bigger part in their development.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

【話題分類】教育類
【題目解析】
這是一道觀點類題型，其大意是：雖然家庭對孩子的生活有很大的影響，但是外面的世界對他們的影響會更大。從何種程度上同意或不同意。
這個題目的的論證核心是“外面的世界對他們的影響會更大”，故觀點可以是：
1）完全贊同外面的世界比家庭對孩子的影響會更大；
2）完整不贊同外面的世界比家庭對孩子的影響會更大；
3）家庭和外面的世界對孩子的影響一樣大；
筆者選擇的是“完全贊同”。

【寫作思路】
開頭段：題目改寫+個人觀點；
Body 1：外面的世界對孩子的智力發展比家庭影響更大；
Body 2：外面的世界對孩子的社交技能和交流技能的影響比家庭更大；
結尾段：重申個人觀點+總結主體段兩個理由。

【參考范文】
It is argued that children are more likely to be impacted by the outside world compared with the influence from their family. Personally, I totally concur with this statement because the academic knowledge and social skills they can acquire from the wider community are more significant to their life-time development than what is provided at home.

The primary reason supporting my stance is that regarding children’s intellectual development, teachers play a more crucial role than parents do. Teachers are known to have to ability to impart knowledge to children of different subjects. In math classes, for example, students are taught algebra and functions, which exercise children’s logical thinking. Similarly, taking history classes allows children to analyse the causes and effects of historical events, helping them improve their analytical skills and critical-thinking ability. These skills are significant in children’s continuous education and future employment. The majority of parents, however, are not able to do so as they are not experts in such areas, thereby being less influential on children’s further advancement.

Another important point I consider is that social skills and collaborative skills, which facilitate children’s future development can, to a larger extent, be cultivated via socialising with peers at school or participating in various activities rather than the interaction with parents. On campus, children may have conflict with their schoolmates, but will gradually understand and learn the way to get along with others if some of their behaviour prevents them from making friends. Meanwhile, there are many activities requiring cooperation, through which children can have an appreciation of teamwork. In contrast, family members shower children with endless love, seldom requiring them to share what they have and always helping them to do everything possible, which is of no benefit to children’s development.

In conclusion, I strongly agree that the world outside home weighs more than parents in children’s development. After all, the important factors in children’s growth, including intellectual development, social skills and collaborative skills can mostly be nurtured beyond a family setting.
（333 words）

【詞匯短語積累】
1.academic knowledge 學術知識
2.social skills 社交技能
3.acquire (v.) 獲得
4.the wider community 社會
5.life-time (adj.) 一生的
6.intellectual (adj.) 智力的
7.impart knowledge 灌輸知識
8.algebra (n.) 代數
9.function (n.) 函數
10.exercise one’s logical thinking 鍛煉某人的邏輯思維
11.analytical skills 分析能力
12.critical-thinking ability 思辨能力
13.continuous education 繼續教育
14.influential (adj.) 有影響力的
15.collaborative skills 合作技能
16.facilitate (v.) 促進
17.socialise (v.) 與…社交
18.peer (n.) 同齡人
19.interaction (n.) 互動
20.have conflict with 與…發生矛盾
21.schoolmate (n.) 校友
22.get along with 與…相處
23.cooperation (n.) 合作
24.have an appreciation 對…有理解
25.teamwork (n.) 團隊合作
26.shower sb. with 給予某人…
27.nurture (v.) 培養
28.a family setting 家庭環境

  以上就是我們給大家整理的雅思寫作大作文中教育類話題的高分范文，對于很多同學來看，第一眼看到這個話題的時候，感覺特別簡單，但是想要把家庭對孩子生活產生的影響說的有理有據，或者說有足夠的邏輯性，難度還是不小的，更多雅思寫作高分范文，請關注我們網站的其它內容。